When I was 5 years old my mother brought my brother and I to our Lola’s house to spend the day while she went to work. We would be the usual rambunctious kids wrecking everything in sight. My brother would stick his head into a large bangga and scream his loudest. I plucked every thorn from the miniature cactus on top of the old out-of-tune piano and sword fight with it against my brother. Our grandmother’s home was old and rickety. If we jumped, the whole house would shake, scaring the resident spiders, and almost giving our poor Lola a heart attack. So that she will have her peace and quiet, when two o’clock came with Helen Vela on the black and white TV our Lola would shoo us out of the house and exile us to her garden. Since it was always hot during the summers, my brother and I always laid down under the Gumamela bush and would start plucking its leaves. In an era where video games like Ataris were exclusive for the richest among us, the second best game in town (for the poorer and most average folks like us) was making bubbles with crushed gumamela leaves and flowers. The more gumamelas we gathered, the bubblier our concoction got. The more muscle we put into crushing the leaves, the thicker the syrupy substance got. Then the afternoon filled with laughter and bubbles and messy clothes. Before long our mother would holler from the tricycle calling us to go home.
In writing, words are like the gumamela leaves. We have to acquire words to be able to concoct an article available for public consumption. The more leaves you put into the mix, the better the brew, in the same way, the more precise the words you put into an article the clearer you can communicate with others. The more words you know the better expressions of thoughts and feelings you can generate. When you generate words that mean exactly what you are thinking, you can successfully say what you mean (sounds circular?). Yes, it is a cycle. It is a process of thinking complex thoughts about a topic and simplifying it into a language people can relate to. Rinda West in her book Myself Among Others: A Sequenced Approach to Writing says that: “Narrative is not merely a starting place. Language determines experience; controlling language in narrative gives writers more control over languages and experience” (West i). Every person has a narration. We all have a story to tell. We tell our parents about our daily experiences, we tell the tricycle driver where we are going and we tell our teachers excuses on why we are turning our homework late (you can always use flash flooding as an excuse if you live near Lagos street). In any conversation, we are relating facts and information that is necessarily for another person to understand us. We do not just mix words like this — pera, ako po, sa outing (money, me and outing). I am sure that when we are asking for an allowance or for gimmick monies, we use a strategy when and how to approach the power and money holders of our homes (re: parents). So, why when we write, we sound like we are blurting out words out of sequence? When we write we are asking our readers to understand, and to have this skill we must understand what we want to say. This is carried out if we have labeled every thought and feeling with the right words. It is also for personal benefit when we collect words. We benefit because, the more words we have in our vocabulary, the better we understand the world around us. The better we understand our environment, the more we understand ourselves. Example, if we did not know the word hot, we would be in danger of burning ourselves every time we light the kalan or pugon (stove or or oven). The word hot can have string of other words to protect ourselves and to use it to warn others. This is the simplest example, imagine the possibilities if we have found the most exceptional word in the planet. How many words do you own?
..nice one!!!
this blog is really nice and it is well written..
I hope I can write as good as this!!
Thanks ellen,
Yes, you can write better. I have high hopes for you.
.the article was astounding!
.i can easily chew the essence of the piece without getting illogical…that is a problem i keep on encountering every time.
.i’ll be waiting for your updates….^^
that was wonderfull!!!
i really like it.
and i am inspired on what i learn.
i dont understand some words but then i have learned something from it.
and i really appreciate it!!!
MABUHAY!
its nice…
Thanks angela!
The article is really amazing.
Some words are unfamiliar to me but i understand the thought.
This article inspires me to write.
The writer is so good he/she teach me to generate words when writing.
I must say BRAVO!!!
Thank you Miah,
Be inspired! Anything to take you to that blank page and start writing is good. Thanks for commenting and visiting this blog.
this article is very nice and inspiring but some of the words are hard to understand but it is good.
nice article!! (:
some words are unfamiliar so I have to used dictionary. haha but the message was really great.
It’s a sort of Applying simple stories to let us understand much better… and I think That’s a great idea of simplifying things out…Nice One…A tool for better works
..this blog entry was great.!..the person behind this really writes well..keep it up!! :0
Very Nice! & Funny.
) So many unfamiliar words huh. It took me a dictionary for it. haha! But atleast I have learned.
I also remembered when I was a little kiddo. Me and my childhood buddies used to make bubbles out of crushed gumamela leaves and flowers. Haha, well very nice idea you’ve got there! Comparing words with gumamela leaves.
AIM HIGH!
some words are unfamiliar but the thought was been delivered in a way that the reader will understand it.
funny:)haha
it was so nice, I like it.
this article is good! although some words AGAIN are unfamiliar ad hard to understand…
it is good because the message is really great!
by this it inspires me to write!
this post is wonderful
and the usage of words ios great .
even though i am not familiar with some of the words i understand it by the way it is used in the sentence.
thanks for sharing some techniques.
it’s a nice blog entry.
some words are quite hard to be understood but i think its great.
it’s a nice blog entry.
some words are quite hard to be understood but i think its great.
ooopsss…i forgot to indicate my name..sorry…
its nice…
one of the best articles i ever read. very inspiring and it really helped me to understand how to write good articles.(thanks for the techniques!) i can say that i learned from this article. it’s a very nice work! you’re the one bloggityblogs! WOW!
this blog is really amazing
the words use are accurate and
the writings is good
i hope i can do my writings better like this
It great, the way the blogger used personification, elegantly to perform thoughts, views, and picture in ones mind who reads it. I love the way he/she wrote it in the fact that it was based from his/her experienced. The thought that he/she is a great blogger reveals every time he/she posted one. I thank Mr. Elumbaring for introducing this site, this blogger to us (students)
ahm,,it’s nice..but some words are really hard to understand…ahm..it is great..XD
all i can say about the blog is that it supplements ones mind the importance of knowing the world around us.
what a great comparison with the plant Hibiscus rosa- sinesis Linn and the different words we commonly used in our life
thanks for the blog. It inspires me to read more and to get in touch more with our world.
that blog was great!
it’s nice.. that blog is also inspiring and i also learned something from that blog..
most of the people who read this blog were right because there some words that i really can’t understand in the blog.
that blog was great! it’s nice.. that blog is also inspiring and i also learned something from that blog..
most of the people who read this blog were right because there some words that i really can’t understand in the blog.
it’s nice.. that blog is also inspiring and i also learned something from that blog..
most of the people who read this blog were right because there some words that i really can’t understand in the blog.
this is a cute yet powerful blog. a blog that teaches us to know the big things in our life is not seen by our eyes. it opened my eyes to a better blogging style, like just writing your true life. love this blog!!! :] jed
This blog is great…! But I can’t understand some of the words written..
But I understand the message of this blog.. yeah!!
The blog is amazing because it tells about words are like gumamela, you need to understand more and make it wonderful.
it was inspiring
i love when words were compared as gumamelas ^^
inspiring
!!!
i learn a lot…
I wish I knew plenty of words just like you so that I could write amazing blogs. I know I’m not good at writing or making blogs but because of this, I will try my best to gain words and put those on my head so I could express my real thoughts. It’s hard for a person to say what he feels when he doesn’t know how to say it. Thank you again for this blog; it inspires me to collect words and improve my vocabulary.